Some suggestions

Fragment of a discussion from Talk:Jennifer Thomas
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Thanks, mate! Also, I would like to ask you to remove the last part of the sentence: strong enough to make even large men tap. To me it does not sound like an encyclopedic generalization. If insisted, it could be revised as strong enough to make anybody tap, regardless of their size and strength. But I would certainly recommend removing this part completely.

Also, please, no pro-wrestling matches in the notable matches section. It's really off-topic on a submission wrestling encyclopedia.

Thanks again!

Zweig17:56, 23 January 2012